Jacob

Jacob

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
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RIP

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I don't know you
But you're my brother

The one of two
That's six feet under

I wish we could have met
You'd be awesome I bet

A great guy
Why'd you have to die

Today, it's been 22 years
It's still bringing mom to tears

She can't move on
Her dear child gone

When we visit your tombstone
I leave y'all alone

Just mother and son
Who's life had just begun

You're in a better place
Held in God's grace



                      Jacob L. Earls
                             RIP







© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
Its been 22 years since he died. I wish I could have known him.

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Indeed, he is in god's place.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


A beautiful tribute and well written. God bless. P.s. I know what it's like to be different, I pray it gets better for you.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


aw, I feel for you bud.

nice poem

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Posted 12 Years Ago


it clearly showed how you missed your brother dearly. it's the worst thing to happen. Having to lose your loved ones. if it would happen to me, i don't know how to deal with it. great tribute to your brother. great job.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thank you it means alot
Wow... Just wow... This really brought tears to my eyes, I feel so sorry for you.
Great poem my friend :) 100
R.I.P Jacob L. Earls

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Earls. And thanks
Denis K.

12 Years Ago

Oops sorry, I have a stupid spelling checker DX
Btw your welcome
I am sorry to hear about your brother ....I loved the poem ...I can relate to this ....I know how much it hurts ...Good job

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thanks
I don't know exactly how does that feel to lose dearest sibling but I know how much it hurts to lose someone who you love so much. I am so sorry. May your brother rest in peace. :) You've shown your feelings clearly in the poem :).

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thanks
Anonymous Girl

12 Years Ago

No problem :)
oh, i am so sorry, thats awful but just like you said "You're in a better place
Held in Gods grace" But still it is hard, Its very touching. Your words are so beautiful, the words fit on the page beautifully, nothing is cricked. Very flowing. :D

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thank you
Mariah Corey

12 Years Ago

np :D
i am so very sorry. this poem is absolutely heartbreaking. i don't really know what to say. sometimes words just aren't enough.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thank you
I'm sooo sorry Harley. Poem is heartbreaking. I'm ssooo sorry again! Even if you didn't know him, I know that you guys woul've been best buds!

I hope you feel better. At least your brother is in heaven....

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

I'm ok. Thank you though

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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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