Jacob

Jacob

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
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RIP

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I don't know you
But you're my brother

The one of two
That's six feet under

I wish we could have met
You'd be awesome I bet

A great guy
Why'd you have to die

Today, it's been 22 years
It's still bringing mom to tears

She can't move on
Her dear child gone

When we visit your tombstone
I leave y'all alone

Just mother and son
Who's life had just begun

You're in a better place
Held in God's grace



                      Jacob L. Earls
                             RIP







© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
Its been 22 years since he died. I wish I could have known him.

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Awe, this was really depressing. It's really hard for a mother to lose a child. Sometimes it's SIDS. It's uncontrollable. I feel bad for her. I know how hard it would be for me if I lost a child. I can't begin to imagine your mothers pain. I know you are wondering what he would have been like. I am sorry that your mother had to experience it. Thanks for sharing this painful story.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Welcome. Thanks for the review
Angie Diane♥♥

12 Years Ago

No problem.
this poem makes me feel you pain

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Posted 12 Years Ago


very touching. a very nice job of letting the pen, or your fingers do the walking.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Held in gods grace,to love the dream of two.somehow we are all connected ,conduits to read with each others hearts ,one day at a time. Sharing growing giving thank you.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


yup....this piece is a perfect ode to your brother..:)
may he rest in peace..thanks for sharing this wonderful work of art..:)

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Posted 12 Years Ago


i know how it feels to lose a love one, so this really hits home for me stay strong and you'll be ok. Very well penned.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


A brother is a brother even in death, I hope it gets easier. & I'm glad you decided to share this

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Posted 12 Years Ago


I am so sorry.R.i.P jacob.Excellent poem

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thank you
It's kinda like "you miss what you never knew"...

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Yeah. Thanks for the review
Wonderful ode to your brother... so sorry for the loss of him. I'm sure he was an amazing guy. :)

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thank you

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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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