Jacob

Jacob

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
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RIP

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I don't know you
But you're my brother

The one of two
That's six feet under

I wish we could have met
You'd be awesome I bet

A great guy
Why'd you have to die

Today, it's been 22 years
It's still bringing mom to tears

She can't move on
Her dear child gone

When we visit your tombstone
I leave y'all alone

Just mother and son
Who's life had just begun

You're in a better place
Held in God's grace



                      Jacob L. Earls
                             RIP







© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
Its been 22 years since he died. I wish I could have known him.

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THIS ONE!!!!! Just fix little grammar things and change "ya" to you and this one definitely! :D

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Falling Leaf.

11 Years Ago

My mentor told me that it looks best to actually write out all numbers under twenty. So I would chan.. read more
Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Oh. Alrighty
Falling Leaf.

11 Years Ago

Yup. This one's awesome :)
Wow. I have a little sister that I would lay my life down for. She even convinced me to not cut once when I was seriously considering it. When I read this, I wondered what it would be like if I hadn't met her. I was almost moved to tears. And I hardly EVER cry!!! :(

This is a great poem and it takes a lot to write something like this. I write about my ordeals, but they are disguised in the plot of my books. You are a lot braver than I am. :)

Great write and best of luck. ^^

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Thank you. It means alot
Felicity's Eve

11 Years Ago

No problem. :)
wow, I really liked this. You may not have ever met him, but I can tell by the way you write abut him, you'd have been a good brother

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Wow... This is a really special piece... It's really sad something like this happened to you... I'm sorry... Great write.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

thank you
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}Echo{

11 Years Ago

:)
Wow this is a very special poem...It's tragic that something like this has happened to you. I can't imagine what that must've been like for your parents, or what it's like living with the knowledge of something like this. Good job.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


sad but very meaningful I like it and I am sorry you never got to know your brother,

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Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the straight-forward nature of your poetry.
(A pet peeve of mine is poetry that thinks it's better than it is, which this thankfully is not.)
I like it.
Well Done.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


How sad, my reagards. (wonderful poem.)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


oh my, this is terrible, but you know, I'm sure he thinks of all of you, my best friend died when I was 33, and I miss him much, ---mishel

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Posted 12 Years Ago


This is very touching, I love it. Well done.

Keep doing what you're doing,
Savannah

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

Thank you
Falling Leaf.

12 Years Ago

No trouble

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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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