Shunned and Lonely

Standing in the rain
With my head hung low

Dealin' with the pain
Of watching you go

And when I see you
Talk to them other guys

I lost you too
Brings tears to my eyes

I hear the roar of the crowd
They came to see me

Get my guitar loud
But I gotta leave

I don't care about the money
I don't care about the fans

I want you and me honey
To be the ones holding hands

I'm a jukebox hero
But I don't give a s**t

I want you know
I want you more than it

I shut the gig down early
And I leave the scene

I tell the fans I'm sorry
I don't wanna be mean

But I gotta make something right
And until it's ok

I wont sleep at night
And no guitar I'll play

I start up my car
And hit the road

She aint in the bar
A full scope showed

Someone said she had gone
On a plane to chicago

So now I'm alone
I get back to the show

The fans went away
Nothing to numb the pain

I lost my baby
I might go insane

Shunned and Lonely
Out in the rain

Author's Note

inspired by my feelings and jukebox hero by foreigner. the poem goes by the opening beat of it. if anyone knows the song hopefully you can get what im talking about. also a little inspiration by 7twenty7 by roxette (maybe spelled wrong) so i hope ya enjoyed. oh and for a review, be harsh. like point out anything that could make it better or any part of it you didnt like. thanks for reading

Reviews

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Wow, this is pretty incredible. One of your best by far. Amazing work, keep it up buddy!

[natzky]

so sad but its kinda sweet also, especially this lines
"I don't care about the money
I don't care about the fans
I want you and me honey
To be the ones holding hands"...;)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[The Analog Kid]

Good job. I could hear the Foreigner rhymes in there:)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Oh yeah

[afra]

Standing in the rain
With my head hung low

Dealin' with the pain
Of watching you go

i loved this part ....awesome write ...i love it ...well done buddy

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks afra ^-^