End of the Line

We had a good run
I'm glad we met
If not for love
This wouldn't be it

I guess we must part
We ran out of road
You've moved on
I should start
I pick up my load
You're already gone

I had a great time
The laughing
And crying
Sublime

I was your shoulder
You were mine
Maybe we can meet again
On the highway of time
But I guess this
Is the end of the line

I regret
To say goodbye
Remember how we met
That fatefull "Hi"

You have your friends
I have mine
This is where it ends
End of the line

:'(

Author's Note

just thrown together. personal experience right now inspired. its not great but its ok. what did you think?

Reviews

[TheAdamBryant]

this poem is kinda sad , that's what u wanted us to feel right , the sadness of the poem ?

[Harley (arbiter)]

yeah amn

[Harley (arbiter)]

*man

[TheAdamBryant]

good poem

[Nicole]

just listened to the song. it goes perfect together :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yaaaaay! :D journey is awesome

[Nicole]

you've captured it perfectly. people usually try to dress up emotions with unnecessary words, but you've got it just right.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks :) you listen to the song?

[Nicole]

no i haven't, but i like it all the same

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well still thanks. I was just wondering if it fit with the piece good :D

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Wow. Sad, heartfelt, perfect. I'm sorry that you feel like this. Good work.

[Harley (arbiter)]

thank

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Np

[afra]

awww so sad tears* ..hope you better .....well done