I sit alone

I sit alone

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
"

all feeling gone

"
I sit alone
all feeling gone

Ignorance is bliss
ignorance I miss

I made a mistake
my nerves made me make

freaking out
made her pout

I'm so sorry
but no more chances for Harley

no matter how many times I've asked
THAT was my last

I need rock and roll
to sooth my soul

so I sit alone
feeling gone





© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
im a lone wolf in school. i simply cant stand or get along with the cool crowd and somehow all my classes are with that crowd. but its also about something happening in my life now aswell so yep. hope you enjoyed it. i know ive done alot better but i still like this one

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The title, flow and wording, left this in my mind.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tczU6OWoUkI

Posted 12 Years Ago


man.. I know these feeling well.. good job.. I like this one too..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ignorance is bliss until you reach an understanding that opens you up to second chances.... Revalations can be made through finding the source of you pain and facing it head on, with rational honest truth, from yourself... Dig deep my friend and I wish only hope to fill you and faith to guide you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Priscilla Sayers

12 Years Ago

Yes, it is:)
Priscilla Sayers

12 Years Ago

There is much bravery and honor in truth:)
Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

yes your right. great minds think alike
This is really touching... It's a powerful piece. I know the feeling... Then people try to be friendly but they get bored with me and forget me because I don't talk to them... Heh, anyway, awesome poem. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ah, being a lone wolf will serve you well later in life even though right now it is very hard. The short form works well and I like how you still managed to insert the rock and roll.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

12 Years Ago

that actually wasnt in it when i wrote it but long story short i had those two lines and a complete .. read more
The Analog Kid

12 Years Ago

haha..just throw it in there for good measure!
thank you, everybody

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow. Excellent work Harley, it's very pure, straight from the heart. Nice job

Posted 12 Years Ago


The intensity of the short stanzas are unbelieveable perfect. And that second stanza was incredible. Sometimes you gotta cut loose and let your heart do the talking, and thats what you did. Its truthful, its raw, its wise~ its you. And its perfect. Rating 100/1000

Posted 12 Years Ago


well, you know they might not be as bad if you talk to them... anywayz, good poem as always and keep up the good work ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, I should say that this is a amazing poem.
Remarkable work!
100/100, as always ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Harley (arbiter)
Harley (arbiter)

the age of classic rock , AR



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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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