im a lone wolf in school. i simply cant stand or get along with the cool crowd and somehow all my classes are with that crowd. but its also about something happening in my life now aswell so yep. hope you enjoyed it. i know ive done alot better but i still like this one
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Ignorance is bliss until you reach an understanding that opens you up to second chances.... Revalations can be made through finding the source of you pain and facing it head on, with rational honest truth, from yourself... Dig deep my friend and I wish only hope to fill you and faith to guide you.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Sorry, Revelations:)
12 Years Ago
yeah. i dont really know what to say here. thanks? i mean your right. so thanks :D you too
12 Years Ago
Chin up. It was a great poem full of heart:) I love the honesty you share:)
This is really touching... It's a powerful piece. I know the feeling... Then people try to be friendly but they get bored with me and forget me because I don't talk to them... Heh, anyway, awesome poem. :)
Ah, being a lone wolf will serve you well later in life even though right now it is very hard. The short form works well and I like how you still managed to insert the rock and roll.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
that actually wasnt in it when i wrote it but long story short i had those two lines and a complete .. read morethat actually wasnt in it when i wrote it but long story short i had those two lines and a complete poem and said... why not lol
The intensity of the short stanzas are unbelieveable perfect. And that second stanza was incredible. Sometimes you gotta cut loose and let your heart do the talking, and thats what you did. Its truthful, its raw, its wise~ its you. And its perfect. Rating 100/1000
I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..