Greatist Fear

Thanks for the name sugestion afra!

yeah i think im losing my touch. my poems arent really that good as some of my older ones. eh idk but yeah this one means alot to me

Author's Note

She likes the bad boys
And ones coming

When he gets here
My love will mean nothing

Ill be just a friend again
And she'll be with him

And it'll hurt
To watch that film

But no matter what I do
I couldn't get her back

No matter how much I try
I will always lack

That one trait
She wants more

Ill always be standing
Outside the door

So I pray to god
He doesn't get here

Because losing her
Is my greatist fear

Reviews

[afra]

name ...humm ...maybe GREATEST FEAR ....BTW i loved the poem ...well done

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks! That name sounds good too!

[The Analog Kid]

I think Afra has the best title though.

[afra]

welcome

[The Analog Kid]

not bad for a rough draft...i like the premise

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks man. No idea on a name?

[The Analog Kid]

"The Story is Already Written" Just a stab.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Huh. That sounds cool... I hope it don't happen like that title suggests but that's cool... ill think about it.