highway of my life

Parody of zbb "highway 20 ride"

i dont think its all that good. it doesnt flow with the song at some points and it just came to me while i couldnt sleep.  its for some people in my life that i cant live without. one especially in mind but all of them aswell if that makes any sense. thanks for reading and tell me what you think its about or what kinda feeling you got from reading it :]

Author's Note

I ride away inside of me
Whenever I need to be free
When I need to leave it all behind

I never meant to scold you
By the things that I told you
It just seems I always get it wrong

So I'll drive
And I'll think about my life
And wonder why
That I slowly die inside

Everytime I try to get it down
But I just end up cryin'
And I think of the days
And the moments
I've spent with you
On the higway of my life

The day might come you'll realise
That I could bring my own demise
And you could've brought me out

And its true you might hate me
That ill be the one you don't want to see
But just remember, I always gave my all

And ill drive
And ill think about my life
And wonder why
That I slowly die inside

Everyday that I'm without you
Its in the back of my mind
And I remember the days
And the times
I've spent with you
On the highway of my life

So when you cry
And you want me to die
I hope you smile
And remember all our times
You brought fire into my life
And I cherished the light

And my whole mind
Begins and ends with us
On the highway of my life

Of my life
My life!
Highway of my life
And I'll ride!

Reviews

[Freedom's Child]

I like it! Very dark and emotional I think the opening stanza is incredible, leaving everyone behind when times are hard. Does a great job of expressing that emotion of losing that life partner who was always supposed to be there.

[J. F. Charleston]

I like how you used the song "Highway 20 Ride" by Zac Brown Band. I found out which song you were talking about at the 7th and 8th line. Really this piece brings what happens with some relationships. Sad and true, but it's so worth reading. Thanks for the request.

[Becky]

Yeah, I don't know the real song, but I like your version. It's powerful and blunt, unlike all these sugar water songs people have come out with lately.

Can you tell I don't much like modern music?

Anyway, nice job.

[That_Girl]

I honestly don't know what song this is based off of but I like the lyrics that you worte. They are strong and flow nicely. Well done. :)

[The Analog Kid]

Reads and flows real well and very lyrical.

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

I liked this enjoyable poem. It shows the emotions and the thoughts.
Great job!
100/100

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

An interesting write. I enjoyed it :)

[Skia1717]

I like it. It made me think of my past.

[Pól]

V. similar to the one I reviewed yesterday. You need to get over it, move on.
P

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well sir there is nothing to get over. See what this is was I've been looking over my life and all my rights and wrongs and etc. Can't really move on from my life unless I die and I'm not gonna do that. I thank you for the review I suppose but please next time say something about the poem except that its simmillar to another. Thank you. Have a nice day sir

[Weeping Willow]

i enjoyed this poem and will share this poem with my mother. because my sister won't want to hear me talk about stuff like this

[Harley (arbiter)]

Lol thanks