Grenade!

Parody of eric clapton's "cocaine"

ok i couldnt sleep and was listening to "cocaine" by eric clapton to drift off into sleep then i thought of what a friend said that we should do a parody collaboration theeeeeen i thought of halo theeeeeeeeeeeen i thought of grenades then i made this! lol its kinda weird how i just went through probably the worst day of my life and wrote a kinda funny parody. it dont exactly fit with the orig. song but it was just for fun lol

Author's Note

Breaking into a room
Wanna make a big boom
Grenade!
Want them go down
No clowning around
Grenade!
Better run
Better run
Better run
Grenade!

If your about to lose
And wanna make a move
Grenade!
If ya wanna hear an bang
Throw that thang
Grenade!
Better run
Better run
Better run
Grenade!

If your ammo's gone
And ya wanna keep on
Grenade!
When ya pull the pin
Can't put it back in
Grenade!
Better run
Better run
Better run
Grenade!

Better run
Better run
Better run
Grenade!

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Haha, this reminded me of FPS video games, especially that part "If your ammo's gone...". Good job, it's really funny.

Oh, I have to ask, what's up with posting work in the Author's Note section? I noticed it a while ago on your work, and now I see Kenzie is doing the same for some of her stuff.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Weeeeel its because the moble site suuuuuuuucks and there's a problem with the actually box, sooooooo to make our poems look all nice and pretty we put it in a box where we can hit enter! Lol and yep it was kinda inspired a little by HALO

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Yeah, I figured it was something like that. That's why I hate going here on my mobile phone.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Its secretly because were weirdos from another planet but don't tell anyone ok? Lol

[Tomislav Petricevic]

lol, ok, I just hope you don't enslave the human race. XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

O.O *puts down plasma gun* no. Not at all....

[♪Barklight♪]

What? well, there goes the univers.... kidding! kidding! *runs and hides from plasma gun*

[Harley (arbiter)]

*Throws plasma grenade where your hiding*

[♪Barklight♪]

RUUUUUNNNN!!!! lolz, is this an rp site now?

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yes. Yes it is

[♪Barklight♪]

Hey! I could make one of those....... idea!

[Harley (arbiter)]

one of what!?!?! A plasma grenade or rp site? Lol

[♪Barklight♪]

lol an rp site! calm down! (if i tried to make a plasma grenade i'd have to explain why there's a crator in my room....)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Oh well cool. If you do send me a link. And uh if you try the other thing uh. Send me a free sample. 20 will do lol xD

[♪Barklight♪]

lol! will try soon, maby some sort of gadget too. no plasma garentees but still.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Hey whatever works lol

[Abbie]

harley... I think your evil is showing! XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

XD thank you!

[Abbie]

it's awesome! I love your evil, its funny! XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

Why thank you, I'm flattered (that sounds kinda weird xD)

[Abbie]

yes, yes it does. but hey, we're both weird, so why does it matter? LOL

[Harley (arbiter)]

I doesn't! :D

[Harley (arbiter)]

*it

[Abbie]

I know, my point exactly! XD

[A. V. Madison]

I worry about you sometimes, Harley lol. But I like it.

[Harley (arbiter)]

You should worry >:D muhahhahahahahaha

[Skia1717]

lol that's awesome! Ah, the memories... I read "Better run..." and thought of when I'd throw a plasma grenade and my dad would hit it with his gravity hammer unintentionally. lol :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Omg yes! Lol

[Crimson Bayonet]

Awesome poem. I can't help but think CoD when I read this. Ugh, I gotta stop playing FPS games....-.-'''

[Harley (arbiter)]

Inspired by halo another fps lol keep playing

[♪Barklight♪]

lol! this reminds me of just about half my buddies at school, (in a zombie apocolypse, keep a supply of c4 on your person at all times is our motto!)

[Pól]

Putting a contempory theme on a classic. Surely Clapton would cover this!! V. clever

[Dr. Wood ?]

I can hear the tune in my head.....I'm ducking.....GRENADE!

[Mariah Corey]

tht was a wicked song, i would listen to it all the time. its very catchy, i luv it. :D

[Freedom's Child]

I have never read a poem about a Grenade, I am positive about that. Great flow, "If your ammo's gone and ya wanna keep on Grenade" is a good line. This definitely feels like a song to me. Nice work.

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This is the type of song I want listen to :D
Awesome Job!
100/100