gift from me to you!

Made up in about a minute.

i just made this up. it has some meaning but i think i kinda veered off topic in the last line. i ran out of ideas

Author's Note

You say my writings awesome
And I don't think that its true

The reason why you like it
Its not me its cause of you

Its how you take the emotion out of my writing
And experiencing it yourself all the way until its through

Its not just words and writing
Its a gift from me to you!

Reviews

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

The poem is amazing
The rhythm is great
I loved it so much
100/100 is what I want to rate :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[Transience]

quite a punch of emotions...correct the typos out there(its)...keep up the good work:)

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks

[natzky]

wow....i really love it...:)
it's an omen that you're an effective writer..heheh

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[natzky]

heheh..welcome..still up?

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yeah, couldn't go to sleep

[natzky]

ahh i see..hmmm, i think the time there is already 3 in the morning?heheh

[Harley (arbiter)]

Its actually 2 but either way its really late.... or really early :D

[Dr. Wood ?]

I think that it is a fine message but I tend to agree with you that it may need a little work...Good poem nonetheless

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yeah I know but thanks

[Mariah Corey]

i luv, very true. ;)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks lol

[Mariah Corey]

:D, np

[That_Girl]

I like it! That's what writing is for; you throw what you're thinking out there and people take what they see from it. Nice!

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks

[Owlgirl]

Nice message :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks

[Irvette Dauphine]

i like this poem.. :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[Heather Maria]

I like the rhyme scheme in your poetry, and it is very witty.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[Heather Maria]

Anytime :)

[Mazie Tackett]

you know i luv ya but i just dont like this one

[Harley (arbiter)]

That's ok lol like I said it just took a minute

[Mazie Tackett]

grrrrrrrrr dont u have something u wanna say

[Harley (arbiter)]

Lol yeah I luv you too

[Mazie Tackett]

=D much better

[Harley (arbiter)]

lol :D

[Mazie Tackett]

thats my boy

[Harley (arbiter)]

Lol ({})

[Mazie Tackett]

lol