gift from me to you!
A Poem by
Harley (arbiter)
Made up in about a minute.
i just made this up. it has some meaning but i think i kinda veered off topic in the last line. i ran out of ideas
© 2012 Harley (arbiter)
Author's Note
You say my writings awesome
And I don't think that its true
The reason why you like it
Its not me its cause of you
Its how you take the emotion out of my writing
And experiencing it yourself all the way until its through
Its not just words and writing
Its a gift from me to you!
Reviews
"Or you're just lying, b***h!" Haha, just kidding. Nice poem. Keep it up, man.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
How did you know?! Lol thanks
I like it. Simple, emotional, and it rhymes! :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
I like it. Simple, emotional, and it rhymes! :)
Cute poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Cute poem.
You can see the point, clearly. It's very simple, and enjoyable to read.
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D
Posted 12 Years Ago
You can see the point, clearly. It's very simple, and enjoyable to read.
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D
This is actually very accurate. We share something and we like it for various reasons. It's really awsome how that point came across.
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is actually very accurate. We share something and we like it for various reasons. It's really awsome how that point came across.
It does have a point and meaning, its what we give each other, writing, a gift. Nicely written, I like how eight lines can communicate so much
Posted 12 Years Ago
It does have a point and meaning, its what we give each other, writing, a gift. Nicely written, I like how eight lines can communicate so much
12 Years Ago
Yeah. Thanks
short yet it gets through your point to the readers. great job! :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
short yet it gets through your point to the readers. great job! :)
i like this! its cute.. well done... :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
i like this! its cute.. well done... :)
I think it's cute and sweet! I love how short and simple it is. Well written, beautiful. Good job. :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
I think it's cute and sweet! I love how short and simple it is. Well written, beautiful. Good job. :)
What an interesting and touching poem. A bit on the short side, but it's still strong and meaningful nonetheless. Great write Harley, and kudos!
100/100
Posted 12 Years Ago
What an interesting and touching poem. A bit on the short side, but it's still strong and meaningful nonetheless. Great write Harley, and kudos!
100/100
12 Years Ago
You're welcome
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Added on August 8, 2012
Last Updated on August 8, 2012
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Harley (arbiter) the age of classic rock , AR
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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur..
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