moved on

just threw together from a few lines from a song. thanks erika for the topic ^_^ and its not my best but its ok

Author's Note

I gave you all of me
Put you first in line
What a waste of time

I was always yours
You were never mine
How could you leave me standing outside?

...

Because your cold
Nothing near bold

Hiding behind your time
Begging to steal mine

I have better things to do
Then deal with a b¡tch like you

I drive off in my Trans Am
Or my Dodge Ram
Knowing I don't give a d@m

And I hope you know
Reap what you sow
Your not the dead weight I'm gonna tow

You think its my loss
Well your the boss

You said move on
Well now I'm gone

And I'm happy and gittery
Because I'm free as can be

Reviews

[deepblue04]

wow, this is very amazing! good job!

[CHRIS ANDES]

..yeah
that's the smell of freedom
=]

[Cosmic kid]

great job amazing poem i can relate mann

[Laura Maidah]

JITTERY

I hate when people spell it with a "g".

YOu think it's my loss?
Well you're the boss.

[Baby Ricochet]

I drive off in my trans am or dodge ram knowing I don't give a damn. HA!
Great job

[Gazza]

I like how you find good in a negative situation. Its clear you weren't too happy but you were strong enough to keep your head up.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

keep writing to feed your integrety

[Fréyjä Helv..]

Your strong and it shows... It hurts you, but not bad enough to bring you down... nice job

[mariah]

wow, i love it! very well said! your great with words, which is an awesome and very sought after writers trai! ^_^ nicely done my friend.
-mariah

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[mariah]

your welcome

[Mazie Tackett]

ok who's this about and text me dude you meantioned food earlier and i got hungry left the phone then when i finished eating you never texted me back grrrrrr this is all pizzas fault it was sooo tempting and i was sooo hungry fat girl gotta eat.......PIZZZA lol oh and pretty good poem

[Harley (arbiter)]

Your not fat darn it!! And I didn't get ya txt sorry I will txt ya right now ^_^

[Mazie Tackett]

i am too and AWESOME!!!!

[Harley (arbiter)]

No your not!

[Mazie Tackett]

yes i am

[Harley (arbiter)]

-_- I refuse to believe that

[Mazie Tackett]

well i am whether you believe it or not

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well your not whether you believe it or not

[Mazie Tackett]

i am