No Sympathy

A country boys words to a city gal that did him wrong, yes its personal experience

i just pieced this together, trying to control my anger and emotion crud inside me, it probably could be better but it gets most the point across

Author's Note

These silly games you play
I won't fall another day
Its time someone had to pay
For the pain they caused me (may *country accent)
A scar left for eternitity (eternitay *country accent)

I was california dreamin'
She had me believin'
I thought it was true lovin'
But it wasn't nothin'
But a prank on a poor guys emotion'

I guess I'm the king of fools
When I thought there were rules
But they're just ghouls
And hurtfull cruels
And love is just them girls tools

They're maneaters
Hurt feeders
Pain leaders
FALSE BLAMERS
Slave laborers

They blame it on me
And I just don't see
Its f*king crazy
No sympathy
There will never be

I loved a lie
And I ask why
Was I the only guy
Caught like a fly
In the venus I die

And all I can say
Used to be sorry (sorray *country accent)
But not today
Its time to pay
And I'm not here to stay

If we ever meet
It'll be neat
With a fist I will greet
My throw will be sleek
That'll be sweet

What goes around comes around
That's the pain I'm bringing down
Like a ravid hound
Make you fall to the ground
By my angerous pound

Eye of the tiger
A lover
A liar
A hatefull fire
Fueling my desire

But I can't help but wonder
And I probably shouldn't ponder
Was there ever something their
Did she ever even care
Or was I just caugt in the snare

Reviews

[Monster]

Almost made me cry with what you had to go through and how you portrayed your emotions. Love the ingenius ways you insulted her and told her off. All in all, it was awesome. :'
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[natzky]

wow, this is really great...mixed emotions were shown here but the most evident one is you're trying to get over with that scenario in your life...heheh..that's a good omen lil' big bro...great job..:)

[T. Logan]

It's good! It could be a song or a poem; either one works.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Never thought about it being a song, but I guess it could work, but yep its just a poem for now

[deepblue04]

This is good!!! I really like it!

[Jordan A. Wilson]

this is really good man. you captured your emotions well in writing this one. name? i'm feeling 'justice for the weary' lol

[Harley (arbiter)]

I like that name but you got out voted lol but I think ill use that... I really like it, but no sympathy fits better here

[Jordan A. Wilson]

it's all gravy haha

[Harley (arbiter)]

Awesome man! Keep on keepin' on. :D

[Crimson Bayonet]

Awesome poem. I loved the accent added to it. 100/100!

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This poem is amazing, I like the flow of words and the rhythm.
Excellent job! Thanks a lot for sharing.
100/100

[That_Girl]

The accent works well. I love this! You told it like it is! Nice. :)

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

I would name this...No sympathy
That just me. I like the punch this has!

[That_Girl]

I vote for 'No Sympathy'!! :)

[Abbie]

I third that motion! :P

[Harley (arbiter)]

Done

[Irvette Dauphine]

yea.. you use that accent to fulfill the rhyme..
i like :)
for the title...
i cant think any good name that fit with his poem
sorry :(