No Sympathy

A country boys words to a city gal that did him wrong, yes its personal experience

i just pieced this together, trying to control my anger and emotion crud inside me, it probably could be better but it gets most the point across

Author's Note

These silly games you play
I won't fall another day
Its time someone had to pay
For the pain they caused me (may *country accent)
A scar left for eternitity (eternitay *country accent)

I was california dreamin'
She had me believin'
I thought it was true lovin'
But it wasn't nothin'
But a prank on a poor guys emotion'

I guess I'm the king of fools
When I thought there were rules
But they're just ghouls
And hurtfull cruels
And love is just them girls tools

They're maneaters
Hurt feeders
Pain leaders
FALSE BLAMERS
Slave laborers

They blame it on me
And I just don't see
Its f*king crazy
No sympathy
There will never be

I loved a lie
And I ask why
Was I the only guy
Caught like a fly
In the venus I die

And all I can say
Used to be sorry (sorray *country accent)
But not today
Its time to pay
And I'm not here to stay

If we ever meet
It'll be neat
With a fist I will greet
My throw will be sleek
That'll be sweet

What goes around comes around
That's the pain I'm bringing down
Like a ravid hound
Make you fall to the ground
By my angerous pound

Eye of the tiger
A lover
A liar
A hatefull fire
Fueling my desire

But I can't help but wonder
And I probably shouldn't ponder
Was there ever something their
Did she ever even care
Or was I just caugt in the snare

Reviews

[Colleen a Bean]

wow I can tell u had a lot of feelings and emotions built up inside u when I read this and I really feel like I get where you are coming from great poem keep up the good wok :)

[Laura Maidah]

sounds like some song.


some great ideas. you are very good, especially for your age

[Aurora .I.]

This my friend is beautiful. It really is, my heart stopped for a minute. I...wow. This is just brilliant! O_O

[SHEEMA HUQ]

the chanting rhythms work, lyrical arrangments also, and think might suit percussion beats...

[Erika Jones]

Filled with so much hate, anger, resentment, hurt, betrayal .. :c Makes me cry a little bit.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Ah its ok

[Skia1717]

Incredible. So full of emotion.

[Mazie Tackett]

good good

[Freckled Princess]

I feel the anger, and I feel the apathy, and I feel all of your emotions really coming through. It leaves a bitter tinge in my mouth and makes me relate. I can relate.
Good work.

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks

[Freckled Princess]

(:

[Alyssa joi]

" Eye of the tiger, a lover, a liar, a hatefull fire, fueling my desire" this line stuck with me because i can understand that feeling, this is really good :).

[Heli]

She's a lover, liar, blamer, and tiger. I saw your dream broken, felt your anger and know you will be better. Sorry for what you've encountered.