cities on flame with my soul
A Chapter by
Harley (arbiter)
Parody of blue oyster cult's "cities on flame with rock and roll"
My heart is black
And my lips are cold
Cities on flame
With my soul
3 thousand mortars
They seem to fire
My heart will melt
And then ill cry
So let the bombs
Let them bombs
Hit and explode
Because pain and hurt
Is all I know
Gardens of flowers
Pretty in the light
Just a burning field
In the night
Cities on flame
With my soul
Watch my anger
Burn out of control
So let the bomb
let them bombs
rain down on my soul
cause pain and hurt
is all i know
© 2013 Harley (arbiter)
Author's Note
Not done yet
Reviews
It sounded nice... I like the image being portrayed cities on fire, being compared to your burning soul... Powerful..
Posted 12 Years Ago
i liked it.. you should continue it.. its really good till here, I'm sure when you write the rest of it, it'll be even better.
Posted 12 Years Ago
i liked it.. you should continue it.. its really good till here, I'm sure when you write the rest of it, it'll be even better.
it sounds really good on the moment!
Posted 12 Years Ago
it sounds really good on the moment!
the start of something good. keep it up.
Posted 12 Years Ago
the start of something good. keep it up.
you left out the b in the second bombs i think. Anyhow, it's really good!
Posted 12 Years Ago
you left out the b in the second bombs i think. Anyhow, it's really good!
Nice! I love the first stanza... keep going! :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Nice! I love the first stanza... keep going! :)
that's pretty sick man. the second stanza is my favourite! good work
Posted 12 Years Ago
that's pretty sick man. the second stanza is my favourite! good work
Can't get the riff out of my head.....
Posted 12 Years Ago
Can't get the riff out of my head.....
Deep and sad. Excellent write Harley :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Deep and sad. Excellent write Harley :)
Hmm...This is quite dark and interesting! I LIKE IT!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Hmm...This is quite dark and interesting! I LIKE IT!
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Added on July 31, 2012
Last Updated on December 12, 2013
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Harley (arbiter) the age of classic rock , AR
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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur..
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