You see?

... eh ... wrote this a while back... i think a month or two... enjoy

Author's Note

When my phone vibrates and I hear that burr
Every txt I get I hope its from her

So many things left unsaid
She probably still wants me dead

It really sucks when the love is true
Can a broken heart really begin anew

They say she isn't worth it
The way she threw that fit

And of course turned it around on me
That's what her friends do not see

So many things I'd like to say to her
When I think of them my eyes blur

The first would be
It was you who hurt me
Not the other way around you see

Reviews

[Aehr]

well portrayed emotions.. excellent piece! 100/100

[A. V. Madison]

Very much of a passionate poem. Emotion radiates in all directions. Exquisite, Harley. Stellar piece, thanks for sharing. Rating 100/100

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks everybody!

[Freckled Princess]

I can completely relate; except the 'she's' would be 'he's'.
I love it, Harley.
:)

[Miranda Richard]

Wow, this is so sad. It's well written though :)

[J.L.]

Nice poem, I know how you feel. I enjoyed reading it, keep writing

[Soulfulbubbles]

nicely done :)

[nigrum homonculus]

this was an awesome write. i know exactly how you feel here. well done bro. really enjoyed it

[natzky]

nice one..heheh...
hope she can also read this....:)

[Harley (arbiter)]

She might. She is on this site........

[YourMajesty2102]

I can completely relate... I hate it when people do that they blame what THEY did on you. Anyway, Good job! I enjoyed it!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yeah it sucks. Thanks for the review!