Over

sigh

time doesn't heal wounds

youre brain forgets they're there

until you are reminded

of how much you still care

 

I thought

but I'm not

over you

It's sad but true

 

tried to find someone new

and forget about you

but I love you girl

you're my world

 

you're me sweetie

my cherry pie

I was youre savior

I was youre guy

 

story I heard till the day I met you

story I'll hear till the day I die

try to move on but I can not forget you

you said you loved me but that was a lie

 

you said it's ok

that you forgave me

but we can't be

you and I

oh how I wish you were still mine

 

I still ask myself why

why am I lonely

why do I cry

you were the only

I was the guy

 

if you could just see

what happened to me

you didn't see the tear I cried

you said you wouldn't hurt me

but you lied

 

it wasn't me

who hurt you

I have the effort

to show you it's true

 

you don't talk to me

what can I do

I should've known better

to give myself over to you

 

I'm regreting

ever letting

you slip out of my life

I was thinking of you for my wife

 

if you would let me

say I'm sorry

and truly give me

one last shot

 

I swear I'll do better

and I don't lie

can't you see

how hard I fight

 

living without you isn't a life

and that's why I try

thats why I cry

I want to have you

but you want me to die

 

S

 

Author's Note

I wrote this a while ago

Reviews

[Renée]

You expressed your feelings well ..

[Erika Jones]

This piece made me cry :'( It's sad, when you lose someone you want to have with you for the rest of your life. This poem touched me in a place that I once forgot ... and now I remember. Like your poem says,

time doesn't heal wounds
youre brain forgets they're there
until you are reminded
of how much you still care

I remember that I still care too much for that one someone I lost a long time ago ...

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well I guess I've accomplished something then. Thanks for the review

Some don't see what they are throwing away... nice work here, truly heartfelt, and very moving.

E.L.

[Fréyjä Helv..]

Damn! I'm going through exactly the same thing... Hate it so much... Glad I'm not that girl who would do stupid things and make things worse like I used to be... These things happen. It may be that hard to believe that he can't be someone you could be with, there will eventually be someone much worth it...

[R.A. Youngblood]

Yeah, i'm sorry you have to go through this, i was in the same situation. I wish that people who we love could understand that we're literally killing ourselves because they left us. Why they don't simply understand it? Like they are people with no emotions. No matter how sorry we are, they'll never understand our pain cause they don't love us, and that really sucks. Yeah, i have many of that poems, that means that i know how it feels. I can see that you truly love this girl, and she was very lucky to have honest and emotional guy like you. Truth, emotions, desperation, sorrow flows in it. There's few grammar mistakes, and you should fix that up, but all in all your poem is wonderful! Thanks for sharing..Keep it up :D

[MsOdie]

Wow very nice and moving.

[pumpkin head]

wow so deeply emotional. I could feel every word.

[Legolas]

This was a very emotional poem. Your feelings for this girl came through very well. She doesn't know what she has left. Any girl would be lucky to have you. Apart from the couple of grammar mistakes, this was an amazing poem. Wonderful job.
~Legolas

[natzky]

wow...such a heart piercing piece lil' big bro...
hmmm...I knew that feeling..:)

[Colleen a Bean]

wow and I thought I could get emotions out about a breakup but u did way better then I could do in a million years. your poem really hit me and that doesn't happen often so spectacular job and I'm sorry she gave up.