Over

sigh

time doesn't heal wounds

youre brain forgets they're there

until you are reminded

of how much you still care

 

I thought

but I'm not

over you

It's sad but true

 

tried to find someone new

and forget about you

but I love you girl

you're my world

 

you're me sweetie

my cherry pie

I was youre savior

I was youre guy

 

story I heard till the day I met you

story I'll hear till the day I die

try to move on but I can not forget you

you said you loved me but that was a lie

 

you said it's ok

that you forgave me

but we can't be

you and I

oh how I wish you were still mine

 

I still ask myself why

why am I lonely

why do I cry

you were the only

I was the guy

 

if you could just see

what happened to me

you didn't see the tear I cried

you said you wouldn't hurt me

but you lied

 

it wasn't me

who hurt you

I have the effort

to show you it's true

 

you don't talk to me

what can I do

I should've known better

to give myself over to you

 

I'm regreting

ever letting

you slip out of my life

I was thinking of you for my wife

 

if you would let me

say I'm sorry

and truly give me

one last shot

 

I swear I'll do better

and I don't lie

can't you see

how hard I fight

 

living without you isn't a life

and that's why I try

thats why I cry

I want to have you

but you want me to die

 

S

 

Author's Note

I wrote this a while ago

Reviews

[writingurl14]

wow this is super sweet! The girl who you love is a lucky girl :)

[Sam Gregory]

This is so sad, so emotive. Very well written, I appreciate u writing this. Good work

[Jocelin]

I lik this, it gives the sad mood that you need when your reading this. This is an awesome piece :) Good job

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks everyone

[Laura Maidah]

It's morbid, depressing, and one of your better pieces.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

aah, superb struture here, fluent and cohesive language.

[Marissa]

this is very touching and it's really good. I Loved it (:

[GunMetal]

Honest and raw. I was able to relate to the feeling in this. Nice work.

[Falling Leaf.]

Wow...so heartwrenching. I am so very sorry for your loss, my friend.

In many places, you used "you're" where it should be your, and you misspelled regretting in the eleventh stanza, but the message and raw anguish here was so ringing and strong that it took two reads to even notice the errors.
Bravo!

Happy writing,
Savannah

[wonderful_wishes]

I really do love this poem. i am very sorry that you are still hurting over her. But i believe that we all go through this at least once in our lives. A heartbreak that really does break us into nothing. I know it hurts but all you can do now is start gathering up the pieces of yourself. some may stay forever broken, but a few broken peices is better than a completly broken you.