A Fate Sealed

A Fate Sealed

A Poem by Unexpectedreamer

Forever lost in time,

I stare at the words goodbye,

knowing this might be the last thing you’ll ever read,

I stare at the silhouette of my body

it’s soul weeping for your sweet song,

My heart is bleeding on the floor along with the smile of yesterday,

As I sat staring at the last goodbye,

The silence is deafening in my world

and it has gone to shades of grey

I wonder around,

lost in a daze,

a daze uncontrolled by me,

your words have mesmerized me,

                Body

                                Soul

           Heart    

                           Mind,

I await for you to come to me.

© 2013 Unexpectedreamer


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As I sat staring at the last goodbye,
The silence is deafening in my worldand it has gone to shades of grey

Captivating poetry

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Unexpectedreamer

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This is a very deep, gripping and intriguing write. I really enjoyed the wordplay, structure and tone of your poem as well. Great write. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Unexpectedreamer

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on May 6, 2013
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