Here with me

forget about everything for one moment

when you're too alone and its been a rainy day

when u cant sense enough if some light is coming your way 

the table of luck is sinking down 

all your sweet smiles slowly turn to frowns 

know that this night would never stay the same 

there's too much weight on your shoulders, so pull it off a little day by day 

find your own muse to dance around 

cz you're too young to give up your crown

when your eyes are soft and a tear falls from your cheek 

u know you'll recall this day when you'll outgrow your weak 

ain't there too much to think about?

so forget about it all and just be here with me now. 

Author's Note

its a small note. everyone of us needs assurance, a hand, thats it.

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading 👍

[grace]

Thank you so much for reading it! I am glad you liked it.

[FGFRANKLIN]

"Hey, ain't it good to know you got a friend cause people can be so cold, they'll hurt you and desert you. They'll take your soul if you let them but don't you let them." James Taylor

You are so right. Everybody needs a hand or a hug or a smile sometime. I so enjoyed the read.

[grace]

Thank you so much for reading it!
I appreciate you for taking the time to read my work :)

[Amani]

Everyone needs someone to pick them up sometimes.
Amazing poem. Greatly moving

[grace]

Thank you so much for reading it :)

[Amani]

you are welcome

[Betty Hermelee]

We all have sad days when it's dreary outside and we're alone, everyone needs a pick me up from a friend whether it's a phone call, a text or a visit... it really helps...assurance is a good word...nice write
Warmly, B

[grace]

Very true dear Betty! Thank you for your kind words and your gentle review. It means a lot to me.

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome Grace
Happy New Year!
Warmly
B.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you.

That is a very hopeful and inspirable poem.

Awesome poetry. Keep it up!

Blessed be!

[grace]

Thank you so much 💓!! i'm glad you liked it!!

[The_Ancient_Rock]

You are most welcome.

Be well!

💖👍

[Isola]

Hi Grace, your poem offers hope, when hope may be fading. The sweetness of the final two lines, nicely encapsulates this.

[grace]

That's wonderful to hear! It's always my goal to uplift and inspire others through my writing, and I'm glad that my poem was able to offer hope to you. Thank you for taking the time to read and appreciate my work.

[Chris Shaw]

All things pass and those sad moments will dissipate like mist in the sun on a beautiful morning.

Chris

[grace]

This is so sweet Chris. Thanks.

[Wanderer]

beautiful.. thanks for sharing

[grace]

Thank you so much for reading