Demon lays

just like the grinning demon lays...

this night is shallow

the demon knows why

hung up in the restroom

her soul has tried

her body has outlined

every path of fury

no more connections

could renew the glory

pace up the heat now

let it run to the rain

across the heat clouds

fastening the cold train 

before get asked again

the new clicked questions

let the glows turn away

in golden like grown hay

past every station stop

new memory awakes

just as levelled to that 

the grinning demon lays 

Reviews

[shadrach hah]

Hi Grace, trapped within the world of addiction, the lady in question seems dried up. The demons are ever knocking at the door and in the end, the true demon shall win. You use such powerful wording in this write on a ladies addiction. What sadness awaits. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always....Mike.

[grace]

Omg thank you so much dear Mike for reading it. I'm glad you liked it! :)

[shadrach hah]

Hi Grace, you are welcome. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always....Mike.

[Cherrie Palmer]

I think over coming addition is the worse mind game people play on themselves. Excellent poem. Hopefully for those in need new memories can overshadow the old.

[grace]

Thank you so much for appreciating it! I am glad you liked it! :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think she has used up her body with drugs...
the demon lies within her. It's a cold train that goes to nowhere.
I really like this piece, grace.
Your writing is really mature...

[grace]

Oh YES!! Finally you're the person to understand what i've exactly written and i'm soo happpyyy!! Thank you so much for reading it!

[Wanderer]

Wonderful poem.. It describes the sad reality of today's world. Thanks for sharing

[grace]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your efforts to read it! :)

[TheEvilSoul]

Oh my god, that last line! Such a wonderful poem!!

[grace]

Thank you so muchhhh!!!

[Chris Shaw]

Your poem speaks to me of darkness and temptations. There are demons everywhere with insincere intentions. I say tread carefully.

Chris

[grace]

Thank you so much for reading it dear Chris! :)

[Sami Khalil]

Beware of Demons and where they lay.
Thank you for sharing ...

[grace]

Haha.. Thank you so much for reading it!!