Scars

i looked at my heart,

which was broken apart,

by the heat they had in them,

and after facing everything,

they tell me they were mistaken...

but a sorry is not enough to bring the broken pieces together,

still i helped myself to heal them and bring them back into one,

but they are apathetic,

cuz they dont know,

that those cuts might fade,

but their scars never go...  

Reviews

[shadrach hah]

Hi Grace, the scars never truly heal, they are always there, ready to slowly open at any time. We can put our hearts together but the scars ever remain. A powerful write, my friend. I love the content of this write. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs always....Mike.

[grace]

Thank you so much Mike, I really appreciate your efforts!

[shadrach hah]

You are welcome, Grace. Hugs always....Mike.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Grace. The scars are reminders of what we had done and learn. Good reminders to make us not to repeat. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[grace]

Yes Coyote, absolutely! Thank you so much for reading my poem :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Grace.

[no tell writer]

Such an insightful read here, truthful as well

[grace]

Thank you so much for appreciating it!!

[TheEvilSoul]

So insightful! I felt it....your work never ceases to amaze me!

[grace]

Thank you so much for reading my poems!! You really brought a huge smile on my face!!