Imagine yourself on a walk in a long park with beautiful fragrance, with a heart seeking for some soul to help and find what you're looking for in your life, you'll be tested, to pass, all you need is patience. This is all what I've written in my poem. Tell me in the reviews if you like it, i'll be waiting to read! :)
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i like it. it is said that patience is a virtue yet something i've never been long on. we're all searching for answers and could all use a walk in that park, stopping to smell the flowers ... :)
Posted 11 Months Ago
11 Months Ago
Thank you so much for your kind review, dear Pete! I'm glad you liked the poem, and i'm grateful to .. read moreThank you so much for your kind review, dear Pete! I'm glad you liked the poem, and i'm grateful to you for reading it :)
The image is so enchanting, lovely choice. I had no idea what "wisterias" were, I had to search this term on the internet, and the images were just so beautiful. They are the purple plants in your image! My favourite line from this piece had to be "only one blessed soul can make it to the last moon" and I found it so mysterious and thought provoking! Thank you for sharing!
Posted 11 Months Ago
11 Months Ago
Thank you so much for complimenting the poem! And thank you so much for reading it, i'm glad you lik.. read moreThank you so much for complimenting the poem! And thank you so much for reading it, i'm glad you liked it!
A lovely poem with amazing imagery, very adorable, author grace. I can imagine the tension when the wind rises, caressing the wisterias for them to fall and land unto the bypasses who are fortunate enough to indulge in their blessings. Such wonderful imagery enhances the mentality of the visitors who must remain stoic and endurant under the various challenges given. Thank you for sharing your work, author grace, it was a very pleasant read.
Posted 11 Months Ago
11 Months Ago
Thank you so much for such an insightful and thoughtful review! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
wisterias grow, I am not sure what wisterias is....
But i did enjoy this write. Nicely written.
Posted 11 Months Ago
11 Months Ago
Thank you so much for reading my poem, dear friend! Wisteria is a kind of flower, like the white and.. read moreThank you so much for reading my poem, dear friend! Wisteria is a kind of flower, like the white and lavender ones i have also posted picture of. I used them here because i feel like they symbolize love and spirituality, which is kinda associated to the theme i tried to depict here.
So yeah, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it! Thanks for appreciating :)
Hi Grace, another outstanding write, your words just seem to sing into the mind and they paint such beautiful canvases in the mind. Your creativity is always singing. One can read the hope and the faith in this beautiful write. I always believe in patience. Once again you make my heart sing. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs always....Mike.
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
Oh my god, you're really sweet! Thank you so much for reading my poem and for liking it too! :)
3 Years Ago
You are welcome, Grace. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs always....Mike.
Faith, hope and patience... How many possible opportunities missed...without faith, hope and patience. Lovely write Grace. Certainly thought provoking. :-))
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
Absolutely.. Thank you so much Susan for appreciating it!
hey to all the beautiful pieces of art here. I love writing and reading poetry, and i may post some of it, so I hope you all like it!!
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