I Am Free!

I Am Free!

A Poem by underwriter
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Just a sudden realisation and feeling of elation.

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I’m free from these chains that brought me right down

To the pit of disaster and pain.

I can see clearly through the clouds that once

Constricted my view

Of all things Holy and good.

I am free, I say again. Yes again and again!

As joy consumes my heart.

I am free to delight in the fine things of light!

And not condemn myself to the dungeon of shame!

Christ has broken my chains!

Set me free once again!

Oh yes I will say it once more,

With a joy that’s so pure.

I AM FREE, I AM FREE I AM FREE!!

 

By underwriter     9/1/2011

© 2011 underwriter


Author's Note

underwriter
I think this is classed as free writng. But not sure. Please correct me if i am wrong. If im correct....please enjoy my first piece of 'free' free writing poetry. :D

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Don't classify, leave that for scientists and politicians who see statistics. This is a poem if you call it one, who gives a flying lump of camel s**t what kind.

This is joy exemplified. You have the faith in the being to hit you like lightning and it shoes. Real mountain top genesis style.

Hallelujiah and stuff

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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So wonderful. Christ has bought us from hell.
I've always wanted to write poems about Christ (and I have a few times), but I feel like that was my late mother's thing and people already say I'm like her. I'm tried to being her.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nicley done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked it, reminded me of a christan song That one of our men sangs!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked it :) It was so uplifting!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is quite the amazing read here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this was very good work, i sure loved this piece!! this was powerful, strong, and such a great sense of self-identity in this poem! awesome!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great to read such a positive expression, of hope and Christian values! Also, this is probably a good example of "free thinking", expressed in the form of a poem. Pretty good, thankyou! Keep writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i really like this happy and light no stress. well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


Free style and talking of being free - great combination

Posted 13 Years Ago


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OT
you can label it as whatever you want!! it's a poem for sure! I agree with EH - free verse, rhyme meh! whatever you feel it is - it's obviously not a story!! I'd classify as a good strong free verse poem! very nice and sweet - the idea of liberation! great!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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**TEMPORARY, sorry but i am stopping my read requests for a little bit, as i have alot on my metaphorical plate at the minuite. i will get round to reading the requests already sent. but please be pat.. more..

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