I Am Free!

Just a sudden realisation and feeling of elation.

I’m free from these chains that brought me right down

To the pit of disaster and pain.

I can see clearly through the clouds that once

Constricted my view

Of all things Holy and good.

I am free, I say again. Yes again and again!

As joy consumes my heart.

I am free to delight in the fine things of light!

And not condemn myself to the dungeon of shame!

Christ has broken my chains!

Set me free once again!

Oh yes I will say it once more,

With a joy that’s so pure.

I AM FREE, I AM FREE I AM FREE!!

 

By underwriter     9/1/2011

Author's Note

I think this is classed as free writng. But not sure. Please correct me if i am wrong. If im correct....please enjoy my first piece of 'free' free writing poetry. :D

Reviews

[E.H. Monroe]

Don't classify, leave that for scientists and politicians who see statistics. This is a poem if you call it one, who gives a flying lump of camel s**t what kind.

This is joy exemplified. You have the faith in the being to hit you like lightning and it shoes. Real mountain top genesis style.

Hallelujiah and stuff

[Calypso]

So wonderful. Christ has bought us from hell.
I've always wanted to write poems about Christ (and I have a few times), but I feel like that was my late mother's thing and people already say I'm like her. I'm tried to being her.

[DalainaRenee]

Nicley done.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I liked it, reminded me of a christan song That one of our men sangs!

[FleetingReveries]

I liked it :) It was so uplifting!

[deeps]

This is quite the amazing read here.

[Undying Glory]

this was very good work, i sure loved this piece!! this was powerful, strong, and such a great sense of self-identity in this poem! awesome!

[Twilight]

Great to read such a positive expression, of hope and Christian values! Also, this is probably a good example of "free thinking", expressed in the form of a poem. Pretty good, thankyou! Keep writing!

[Bette]

i really like this happy and light no stress. well done

[DeViouS]

Free style and talking of being free - great combination

[OT]

you can label it as whatever you want!! it's a poem for sure! I agree with EH - free verse, rhyme meh! whatever you feel it is - it's obviously not a story!! I'd classify as a good strong free verse poem! very nice and sweet - the idea of liberation! great!!