Supernova Embers

Embers are sparking catching fire, holding flame.

     The fire is spreading, destroying, burning.

          The burning is all consuming, ever growing, immortal.

 

From this inside out it burns with vendetta.

     As if any moment it will combust, explode, become supernova.

          And turn to the ever engulfing pit that is a black hole.

 

Yet all the while sitting by as it happens,

     Almost welcoming the impending destruction, devastation, doom;

          Allowing it to seduce, and enjoying it in return.

Receiving it with open arms, smiling, finally sealing fate with a fatal kiss.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[SonOfPlunder]

Brilliant title, brilliantly worded. Very nice

[zainul]

Superb work.
Love the piece.

[Victoria Nakis]

Thank you for reading.

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear poet.:)

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Love the name! And the poem I loved it:)

[Horizons]

Whatsoever you knew about "Embers" you just beautifully penned up into the scented words that came right from the bottom of your heart. I enjoyed reading this, even am still feeling so refreshing feel after reading the piece. It's really so nice one. "The blue sky's in the life, ember're in the sky" it's true and am thrilled to read how you just converted your feelings into the piece...everything the life's contained in it you've expressed very well... that's all i just got. I enjoyed it and now am gonna save it into my folder and gonna fav. it as well as put it into my library right now... i loved this piece, your creativity's creative and it's well demonstrated poem you made. Brilliant job!

[Victoria Nakis]

Thank you so much. I deeply appreciate it. I am honored to be saved to a library.

[Sami Khalil]

"destruction, devastation, doom;

Allowing it to seduce, and enjoying it in return.

Receiving it with open arms, smiling, finally sealing fate with a fatal kiss."

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Victoria Nakis]

Thank you for taking the time to read it and consider its worth.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)