I hope...

This is dedicated to my abuser!

I hope you suffer

I hope hell eats your organs

I hate your ugly face

Author's Note

I became so angry last night when I thought about how I was treated, how I was hurt. Instead of saying anything I wrote a haiku.

Reviews

[Jazique]

Nice a haiku that says so much with so much feeling expressing the meaning of hope when thoughts never count but, the feelings inside the (anger, hurt, and cruelty) anyways well done as to expressing yourself as any type of poem is the best way to portray it as you have painted a vicious in a state of anger work of art. Well done.

[Judas Hammer]

when my Eagles lose I feel this way about the world

[A Risen Heroine.]

This poem shows anger.
You hate your abuser, no doubt!
Well done and thank you for sharing.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[donella75]

That's exactly how I feel about my ex-husband...but just mentioning him is making me ill. Why do I waste my time?

[ivizarx]

Not the normal concept for a haiku, but well done ^_^ if this doesn't say: "back the F off" then I don't know what does :p
awesome I say, good read, keep it up

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Anger, lust and the true way of biting back, well done, good read.

[Robin]

bitchslap haiku

[Dreamer]

Wow...had to pull back. For a second i thought u were talking to me...the words jumped off the screen and slapped me in the face. Urrrggg...strong emotions in terms of the poem. In terms of life, we shud try never to let ppl cause us to feel this way. Even if they do, we need to pray an move on but not for them for us.

Good write

[sarah]

Man I have felt this way! Strong write!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Short and sweet. No one should be mistreated. I hope that if this is true you are able to get out before something major occurs. Great write.