Samantha's Story Pt. 1

A story in poem about a lost, dead girl.

Samantha’s End

 

Gone within the night.

“Thee be missed,” Said the priest

Death isn’t the end

Author's Note

1.Top Haiku
Dec 1, 2011
Haiku Contest

2. Best
May 15, 2012
P-O-E-T-R-Y

Reviews

[Julie Beth]

short but great, i liked it awesome job :)

[Safe&sound<3 ♫]

Great! I like it(: I like the last line the best. "death is not the End." you're very wise and very right.

[ivizarx]

A great haiku which contains the narrative of someone who dies in their sleep and cuts to a scene with a priest giving a speech of the dearly departed. The only thing though, the second line I'm counting has 6 syllables instead of 7 :/ other than that, the poem is pretty flawless. I enjoyed it :) thnx for the RR.