Curious

Nose in a book.

Head in the clouds.

Hunger for knowledge.

Soul trapped in a vortex. 

 

I’ll try to send you well wishes

and kisses.

But I remember now

why I hate you.

 

And why didn’t you answer

the phone as I confess my love?

Why of all times am I left

to wonder if you were really human?

 

Were you the creation of my lonely mind?

Or was your velvety voice the product

of insanity? Maybe I just

wasn’t the ‘one’?

 

Heartbroken I will live on.

I will remain to be the person I

was before I met you.

Curious.

 

A new creation, older by a few days.

My mind remains to be like candy.

My mind will remain curious without you.

 

Reviews

[trainwreck]

I love the way this developed totally naturally. There was nothing forced or awkward in the flow of your piece. The last couple stanzas really twist the mind up with questions.
Great job!

[Sarah Jane]

The flow was impeccable and the poem itself was amazing. I really liked the stanza
"Were you the creation of my lonely mind?
Or was your velvety voice the product
of insanity? Maybe I just
wasn’t the ‘one’?

I really enjoy your work and always look forward to reading you're pieces. Keep up the good work:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Those unanswered question can haunt us. I like the way you use the word "curious". Allowing the reader to fall into your thoughts. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sunflower 20]

this poem flowed really well, and i liked the imagery created by your words, great job :)

[Daydreamer54]

I love the first and last stanza. Awesome write!

[MandaBear]

very cool poem:) very imaginative

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Love the coloring again! A really deep poem with soul!

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

A interesting piece with some introspective and imaginative wording.

[OT]

great flow to this one!! some of the rhymes linger on which connects it all really well! and some brilliant imagery - "my mind remains to be like candy" - a very unique approach!! nice!!

[diannesam]

I love the flow of this peom, very beautiful