Butterfly

My first try at a Haiku.

Graceful Red Butterfly.

      Hidden woods. Filled with emotions. Paper

                               Grace rainbows.  Revenge!

Author's Note

Master Cryptic
Mar 9, 2011

* A Cryptic Message

Butterfly

DELIGHTFUL
Jun 22, 2011

* BUTTERFLIES
* Butterfly

Reviews

[Luchia Noname]

i like it alot its like starts all nice then ends with revenge >< nice

I like it.
It goes from peaceful and graceful to something horrific.
Very nice. :)

[Tina Kline]

This creates a very pretty image of a butterfly in the forest but something happens in the end that's not so nice. I do like the poem.

[Veronica]

Nice! :) Loved the color! ^^

[Chris38]

I loved the different colours which seemed to add a change of emphasis in each little sentence. Am still thinking about this one. Fantastic.

[Caitlynxoxo]

short sweet, and a satisfying read. I agree with the other reviews: a poem such as this makes the reader think, which I did a great deal :) suffice to say, i loved this! It was a very beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[Sunflower 20]

nice. i like the way you set it out. it brings emotion to the poem. nice job :)

[pamzilla. &hear..]

I thought, and thought, and thought.
I loved, and loved, and loved =3
♥ ♥

[Ashley]

i like this, it makes me think .