13 lines

Sun

Blazing

Summer Heat

Melting Ice cream

Swimming in a pool

I love summer vacation

Late nights, long movies, fun

 Snaking out when Grandmother is asleep

 Summer love never lasts forever

 His arms are my haven, a place of love

 Mid- July, hot days, even hotter kisses full of love

My desire. Lost in time. Filled with love with everlasting lust   

  He hasn’t left, my summer fling. For there is much love

Reviews

[Carl Thomas]

Nice upbeat poem. Nearly didn't read the last line though as it didn't seem part of the poem.

[absolutefolie]

This made me remember my summer :) Lovely piece, thanks for sharing

[IComeAnon]

I like how the form of the poem is so tightly woven into the poem itself. The gradual growth of each successive line an the lack of punctuation at the end showing the continuation.

Fantastic poem.

[Starr Silver]

I like it a lot. I write a lot of my poems like this, but I call them nonscence.

[Olive Belikov]

love the way its formed.. great job

[Blue Bird II]

Splendid use of the format. I love it! Indeed you are a creative writer, I look forward to your other writings.

[Helen Crutchett]

Delightful poem penned so well! Thank you for submitting this to the "Menke" contest. ~ Helena

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Well done!