Undefined Sanity

A little poem that I hope will be read. Thanks for being kind to me.

I fall into lucid nightmares.

Dreams of melting strawberries, murder, escape from heaven and hell bound demons.

Please don't end. I can learn so much about my self from this.

A whorl pool of reality and secrets come alive and try to kill me.

And they do, but I come alive as I wake.

In over my head. A chamber of hell, but I belonged there, because I asked to be there.

Punishment in its most sadistic form.

Self- Hate in the most masochist person.

My dreams play out in a world of what has happen, and what can happen.

Author's Note

Awards:

1. Third
Dec 16, 2010
Struggle

2. pretty good
Mar 9, 2011
a cure for boredom

3. You are aware of your surroundings
Aug 31, 2011
Views Of Our World

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

I find it interesting that the dreamer doesn't wish to awaken from the nightmare, but as you put it, "I can learn so much about my self from this." And we can learn so much from our dreams. Excellent write!

[Bud]

Wow! This I find to be deep...love it! Keep up the outstanding works of art!

[Krista]

I love it. I just started reading your work but what I have read I like alot.

Keep writing!
Dont stop!
Nightmare or not.
something must inspire you.

exuse the poor grammar. I am starting to tire some

[Lyra H]

A hidden gem of a poem!