when im with you

when im with you

A Poem by heich
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nahh...hmmn..i dunno..i did'nt wrote this...lol..my 9 year old cousin did..she begged me to pose it...

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a walk in the rain
 a run in the forest
holding hands in the sand
handing the world in your palm

a thunder in the dessert
a tear in your smile
reaching the moon
seeing love in your eyes

your'e amazing
you are my whole world
i want to be with you
and make you mine forever

© 2010 heich


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wow~ very mature thoughts and advanced writing skills your cousin has~ =)~
a sweet light air of a poem~

Posted 14 Years Ago



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heich
heich

dipolog city, Philippines



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i'm an undecided writer. i like to write things that i see..about love pain and such but i never really had any experience about those things..i enjoy writing poems and short short stories. there a.. more..

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