when im with you

nahh...hmmn..i dunno..i did'nt wrote this...lol..my 9 year old cousin did..she begged me to pose it...

a walk in the rain
 a run in the forest
holding hands in the sand
handing the world in your palm

a thunder in the dessert
a tear in your smile
reaching the moon
seeing love in your eyes

your'e amazing
you are my whole world
i want to be with you
and make you mine forever

Reviews

[Candylove.]

this is stunning, and wow..that's a talented 9 year old. haha I loved this. It's beautifully written. :)

[Cassiopia Summers]

It's cute that a nine year old wrote this. (: It's adorable to think that someone so young thinks this way.

[the in between]

Whoa thats intense for a 9 year old to have written this :)

[Forever Mine]

For a 9 yr old this is pretty dang good lol

[Ed Hart]

somebody's home here

this is nicely written for a nine year old. Well done.

[Robin]

for any one that is good for a nine year old amazing !

[Brandon]

fantastic short and to the point i loved it keep up tyhe good work



100/100

[Dream Weaver]

Beautifully written Bunso, Short and sweet
absolutely magic...

[Brad]

so simple and so beautiful...need, want, love...it's all there