heart drenched

A Poem by heich

dunno..lol..

Send me some lovin'
no matter where you are.
Give me some hopin'
I don't care how far.

I'll send you a kiss
coz' it's you i miss.
I'll give you my heart
eventhouhg were far apart.

© 2010 heich

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The writing is good itself. But the writing needs work. Words are misspelled and you need to work on capitalization. Great writing. It is very excellent and loved the first stanza and how you started the poem. :)

Sorry about the criticism, but everyone needs it to become better :D

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..

charming~engaging sweet~lithe little song~

Posted 14 Years Ago

Dream Weaver

Sweet and carefree
light and gentle...
Nice one Bunso...

Posted 14 Years Ago

J.S. Pua

nice..
simple..
good write..

Posted 14 Years Ago

TAO	Charming in its simplicity and innocence. Not usually my sort of thing, I think, but worth the read. Well done. Posted 14 Years Ago Charming in its simplicity and innocence. Not usually my sort of thing, I think, but worth the read. Well done. Rating /100

ScarlettTheDreamer

Nice. I like the simplicity in this poem. Good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Robin

I love it , havent we all stood at the edge of the sea and sent out this call

Posted 14 Years Ago

Brandon

nice i liked it

100/100

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on August 4, 2010
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Author

heich

dipolog city, Philippines

About

i'm an undecided writer. i like to write things that i see..about love pain and such but i never really had any experience about those things..i enjoy writing poems and short short stories. there a.. more..