i care

i care

A Poem by heich
"

tell me something..lol

"
you say you love him
i smile.
i break.
you say he's you're life.
i chuckle.
i bleed.
when will you ever notice?

© 2010 heich


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i'll tell you something, you've got the groove

Posted 14 Years Ago


like a back rub after you have laid in the sun all day ....

i like it

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very beautiful and, at the same time, very sad.

These words give life to a heart breaking.

"you say you love him
i smile.
i break."

Absolutely beautiful :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is beautiful... Nice work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice. So deep and heartfelt. Good job :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 23, 2010
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heich
heich

dipolog city, Philippines



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i'm an undecided writer. i like to write things that i see..about love pain and such but i never really had any experience about those things..i enjoy writing poems and short short stories. there a.. more..

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