believe

nah..what you think?

live and die
laugh and cry
gaze up the sky
everything's worthwhile

smiles and tears
love and fears
life is a maze
and not a race

truths and lies
stop and go
stand and rise
then take it slow

climb the mountain
find that fountain
it's your life
make it a strike

Reviews

[Onyx_Rayne]

"smiles and tears
love and fears
life is a maze
and not a race"

Very wise words here. Life is definitely about winding through the mystery paths.. seeing where they lead. Too many people try to move through life too fast and they never really get to enjoy it.

Fantastic write - Love it :)

[Daydreamer54]

Nice poem here! it's very beautiful and trueful! great job! :)

[Dinesh Sairam]

One thing I found disturbing was the inconsistent rhyme scheme. aaax is an awesome rhyme scheme. You could have maintained it throughout. My favorite verse :

"truths and lies
stop and go
stand and rise
then take it slow"

Flowed like silk. :)

Keep writing.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

smiles and tears
love and fears
life is a maze
and not a race
Those lines were awesome! great write !

[Dream Weaver]

Beautifully crafted Bunso, I love this one
from you. So positive and it flowed
perfectly. Sweet write!!

[Leanne Conway]

"truths and lies
stop and go
stand and rise
then take it slow"

I just love those lines. Such a beautiful poem.
I love it! =)

[.]

{i love this-a free flowing positive piece of poetry!!!}

james:-)