believe

nah..what you think?

live and die
laugh and cry
gaze up the sky
everything's worthwhile

smiles and tears
love and fears
life is a maze
and not a race

truths and lies
stop and go
stand and rise
then take it slow

climb the mountain
find that fountain
it's your life
make it a strike

Reviews

[De'Andre]

This is the first poem I've ever seen written like this. This is a very unique style. Great message and great write. Nicely done!

[mystique]

great meaning but can be improvise seriously i can understand that this really means the truth

[Ed Hart]

my goodness, another one of us

[Neisha Ann]

Unique style, great message. Great job!

[Andrew Wright]

Inspiring. this is a pretty string for the mind to follow. Great read

[Ima]

hmm...
its different and catches the attention of the reader
good job

[Randolf Ramos]

Good experimentation of poem, great.

[Cassiopia Summers]

I like it, but I think it would flow better if you had the first two lines of the third stanza. It would improve the poem greatly.

But all in all the poem is wonderful. Especially because the rhymes are opposites. Great job!! :D

[Sonali]

This rhyme could be unending.There's so much in life.Good use of opposites like--smiles and tears
love and fears

[Gracie-San]

The rhyme was inconsistent but it still flowed very well. I think the first stanza is my favorite because there's truth in it.