maybe

maybe

A Poem by heich
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wrote it when i thought i liked a guy..i was totally wrong..lol

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When you smile that smile i stop and stare.
when you laugh that laugh i wish you're here
then i close my eyes and whisper "maybe"
Just maybe you think of me

© 2010 heich


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Awww.. sooo sweet! It has that " new love " feel to it. Which is always the best part of love.

This poem made me smile with remembering.

Very nice write :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


AW, very sweet! When you think of someone u love, I'm pretty sure they r thinking about u as well! Nice work here! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


"when you laugh that laugh i wish you're here"

Er, you are seeing her laugh and how can you wish she were there? She's already there!

A short poem of longing.. :)

Keep writing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


short and sweet..
good work..

Posted 14 Years Ago


So sweet ! so short and perfect!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


We all go through this stage in the beginning bunso,
Still and all a beautiful piece ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awe, This sweet and wonderful. It's well written and I love it =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Sweet. Someone wondering that the one she's thinking about, might be thinking about her too. :)

I think the "you're" in the 2nd line, should be "you were" here.
"I wish you were here"

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aww. I loved it. Made me smile. Great Job! =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


"then i close my eyes and whisper "maybe"
Just maybe you think of me'

{ahhh- the sentimental remembrance of love--wonderful poem}

james:-)


Posted 14 Years Ago



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heich
heich

dipolog city, Philippines



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i'm an undecided writer. i like to write things that i see..about love pain and such but i never really had any experience about those things..i enjoy writing poems and short short stories. there a.. more..

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