rain

lol..i just love rain..kinda confused if you would get the meaning though..lol

The rain reminds me of you.
It remind me of the things we used to do.
it reminds me why my heart was broke in two.
And yet i'm still happy that i do.

Reviews

[RTB]

aw ur poems are all cute and wut not i like um they make me smile :)

[Leanne Conway]

Rain is beautiful. I love this short sweet poem. Nicely done =)

[Onyx_Rayne]

Beautiful write. The rain can be a reminder of many things. Personally, I love the calm of the rain - it's best for me to blank out my mind when it's raining, it's a nice escape.

The end of this piece is nice.. even though all of these reminders come from the rain... these reminders of the past - there is still happiness in remembering.

I did find one teeny error ... the last line "syill" = still?
Just so you know.. that , in no way, takes anything away from the beauty of the write.

Excellent work :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the soft sound~ the crisp sound of the rain is made tangible through your well constructed and descriptive poem~

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Beautiful. And the line was 'it reminds me why my heart was broke in two' was awesome!!!

[Dinesh Sairam]

It's 'Broken in two' and 'I'm still happy..' :)

Nice, Keep writing :)

PS. I love rain too ;)

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(Just so magnificently wonderful--I Love The Rain-
...i actually stood out in the rainfall yesterday...
--this is a sweet nostalgic "rain induced poem"}

james:-)