rain

rain

A Poem by heich
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lol..i just love rain..kinda confused if you would get the meaning though..lol

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The rain reminds me of you.
It remind me of the things we used to do.
it reminds me why my heart was broke in two.
And yet i'm still happy that i do.

© 2010 heich


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Posted 14 Years Ago


Short & sweet, and very amazing. =) I love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aw. I really loved this poem. Great job. ^_^

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this poem. The rain can bring with it so many emotions. I can feel so much in each line.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The rain reminds me of you.
It remind me of the things we used to do.
it reminds me why my heart was broke in two.
---- great lines here memories lingers in you, great.


Great i like your poem, touching the heart and soul.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Actually, I understand this completely. I love it. I love the rain, it makes me happy.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was also short and good, rain brings longing, you used it well.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simple and sweet, yet very very effective! Great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is sweet and short! I love it! Excellent job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Marvelous work! It made me smile :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 23, 2010
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heich
heich

dipolog city, Philippines



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