hold me

tell me what you think..

pull me close and tell me things i like.
hold my hand and make me stay.
wipe my tears and make it right.
do anything in every possible way.

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

Beautiful Bunso :)
I love it.

[Dinesh Sairam]

Nice. Nothing much to comment upon or critique. Just.. nice :)

[Amber-The-Panda]

Great Poem. It was short ad sweet. You chose the right words and rhymes.

[Sam Severn]

Simple and oh so emotional!!! Love it!! ㋡

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a truly affecting reaching outward~ earnest and beautiful~

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NICE-I love this!!!
--expressed in a short creative way---
"wipe my tears and make it right.
do anything in every possible way."
{Awesome}

james:-)