getting over

getting over

A Poem by heich
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yeah..i love to write poems about love..but honestly..i never felt it yet..lol..send me reviews..

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close thy eyes
hide thine smile
twas a love all was a lie

loving still
heart that feels
life's a waste
endless chase

close thy eyes
show thine smile
twas a love
now goodbye...!

© 2010 heich


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I actually adore this. Short Sweet and Simple
Your first line though I believe you meant to
say eyes. And to be honest, you didn't have any
punctuation throughout the whole thing, so
I wouldn't put it at the end either. Great work.


Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 5, 2010
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heich
heich

dipolog city, Philippines



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i'm an undecided writer. i like to write things that i see..about love pain and such but i never really had any experience about those things..i enjoy writing poems and short short stories. there a.. more..

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