the art of letting go

i made this when i was 12..i can't even remember why..pleas tell me what you think..

i can't really remember
when you walked out that door
now i sit in the corner
with my heart so sore

each time i lay in my bed
i just cant forget the things youve said
that you would find serenity
just to hold me till eternity

as i cry those tears at night
i just wonder if i could fight
the hurt feeling deep inside
till i fall asleep feeling tired

i woke up facing the world alone
wondering if you would call into the phone
then i smiled and said 'now i know'
i know and ive learned the art of letting go..

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

I liked it. but it needs to be tweaked some.
It has a strong base but some words you
might want to change. overall a very good
write

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

That was nice but i don't think 'with my heart being TORE is right. I liked it :)