you're mine

i wrote it in like a minute

lost in the moment
where you held my hand
you are a heaven sent
finer than a sand

eyes that sparkle
lips that go dazzle
love so fine
thank god you are mine

Reviews

[The Fatal Lover]

Wonderful Poem. Great Job. I Loved It. Can't Wait To Read More Like This. =)

[Iota]

Heich this is a sweet write and I am sure many of us are thankful for the ones we love in our lives. Yes thank God indeed. Great write.

[Cassiopia Summers]

This is a great poem heich. (: It's not dragged out. It's short, sweet, and can be real!! (:

[Revolved]

This is so cute and sweet!

[SimplyDisastrous]

Short and sweet (:

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

pure and sweet sentiments~ the light touch is perfect for the subject~ =)~