Serenity

This is a free verse poem of recent completion. I'll let the reader decide what it's about

I am serenity and violence
moving an ocean of sorrow
to its home in the past

The waves of regret ebb
from my shore
draining the space and time
of tomorrow
exposing the empty sand

I am not truth or falsehood,
nor am I confined by conviction
expressed in a pause,
I am emptiness complete

I am Donne’s clod
washed away by the sea
and I am the less

Satisfied by nothing

Author's Note

Please feel free to criticize. My aim is to get better, and so long as the criticism is constructive it can only help me do so.

Reviews

[James Paulin]

Intrinsically fascinating and well crafted. Welcome to WC!

[[KL]]

A very interesting piece lol.. I myself cannot really decide what this could be about.. It can apply to many different things in life.. It's still a good piece though. Well done =D
[M]