Where my minds at

Now I lay down for just a little nap

But that's just not where my minds really at

Instead the tears roll down my cheek

And I feel nothing but weak

It's not like we are waiting for her to improve

But more just waiting for her to die so her body we can move

Not so many years ago I wouldn't have fell apart

A big piece of stone then was my heart

Yet now I sit back in total shame

This isn't how she would have wanted life's game

Now I just pray for some time alone

To cry , chat or pick up the phone

Many friends wonder if it's really me

This is the side not many get to see

What they once knew was ruthless and cold

Living my own way is how I've always rolled

Now God has put me to this evil test

For how long no one has even guessed

I beg God to just set us all free

There has got to be a place in Heaven for my sister Lucy

So God please listen to me as I pray

She doesn't deserve this just take her pain away

Let her feel all the Love that you Share

And open the Pearly Gate when she gets there!


An Uncle Charlie Original

Reviews

[KeturahWrites]

Wow! so much emotion Loveee it! It really amazes me what people can do with thoughts and wrap them into a poem in that way. Something by which i could never do. Your poems are so much better then the others that i have read 1. Because it seems so real and easy to slip into. 2. Because it simply tells a story.
Well Done!