If love only came in spurts
A Poem by unclecharlie
If love only came in spurts
A lot less people would be hurt
The meaning no need to find
Because we'd really not have the time
Long term plans would be a waste
Love would come and go in haste
And at times we wouldn't even care
If for now Love wasn't there
Life would be simple and some what a breeze
Think of the pressures this could ease
But we all want Love that will last
So into the world our net is cast
And if true Love you one day find
It will be from the heart and not at all from the mind
So if you feel you've found the one
Just remember, the work has only just begun!
An Uncle Charlie Original
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© 2010 unclecharlie
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There seems to be a contrast between love coming in "spurts" and the "absence" of love.......I am not too sure of the flow there.....however.....the contrast initself is an interesting idea......thanks !
Posted 14 Years Ago
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unclecharliePalm Coast, FL
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Here is just a little about me. I have lived a life of choices and disappointments. Never counting on anyone but myself. I have had lots of alone time and lots of hard knocks. What doesn't kill us wil.. more..
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