The 10 Kisses of Delight

The 10 Kisses of Delight

A Poem by unclecharlie

The ten kisses of delight,
1) Is after the first date goes right,
2) Is just a little bit more,
As I walk her to the door,
3) Makes me wonder when,
I will see her again,
4) Is like the bottom line,
And I know she's all mine,
5) When she can't help but call,
Not wanting me to see anyone else at all,
6) This one gets a little bold,
When we wonder what the future will hold,
7) This is when we know for sure,
We're in Love and there's no cure,
8) This is when it feels just right,
When I say with her for the night,
9) This is when on the date I bring,
A big Diamond on a little ring,
10) This is when we say I do,
And everyone knows I LOVE only you!

An Uncle Charlie Original

© 2008 unclecharlie


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do i need to say something that will let everyone know that this was magnificent? i think not. they can find out for themselves :-) incredible. for some reason, reading this piece of work put me close to tears. i guess its because it was just so powerful to me. i connect with this so much, even though it was short and simple. the words and phrases were just meshed in so well!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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unclecharlie
unclecharlie

Palm Coast, FL



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Here is just a little about me. I have lived a life of choices and disappointments. Never counting on anyone but myself. I have had lots of alone time and lots of hard knocks. What doesn't kill us wil.. more..

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