I'm Ok

here is a little poem i wrote when i felt down, yet i knew that i had to show everyone that i was going to be alright

I wake up early today
To see the sky so grey
I feel my mind wonder away
To those times I had so much to say

I remember those memories that lay
And sigh to myself in dismay 
We all have our dues to pay 
We cannot simply continue to delay

I remembered when it was my birthday
I felt more like a haunted prey 
Or a flower that slowly began to decay
It was more like doomsday 

I shrug these feelings away 
Leave them at bay
Put on smile on for display 
And tell you I'm okay

Reviews

[Daniela Jamiso]

Wow. Just wow. 100/100. amazing :)

[umbraeyes]

thank you!! im gonna add some of my other poems so it would be great if you would read then too!

[Daniela Jamiso]

Okay cool :D

[gcp]

That's some serious rhyming :)

Everything will be ok in the end - if it's not ok - it's not the end.

[umbraeyes]

thanks!!! im gonna add some other poems too :)